Is my poem any good??? :/?

You're wonderful hun! Very intense and insightful for such a young writer. Keep up the good work. Poets make huge differences in society if they set their minds and hearts on it. You seem very in touch with your own feelings, and not many people (especially adults) are. So try to keep that in mind, and really good job!

How should I diffuse this situation?

OK.soo i was bored and its late,so i was about to have a night of spanking the weasel,so i went upstairs to get some lotion,but forgot that porn was already on the computer screen downstairs,but i went up there anyway.my sister,who is very opposed to porn,was having a hard time sleeping.when i heard her walking downstairs,i ran down there but it was too late.i couldnt find her for about 5 minutes but i heard her working in the sink,which is right next to the computer,so she probably saw it.when she returned to the room,she scowled at me then walked away.any suggestions.

Problems with my bestfriend?

Ok so my best friend of fourteen years who is also my cousin in law and just got over a fight. The fight was over her hurting my feelings and getting angry with me over me trying to talk it over. She basically said that by telling her I was hurt that I was a bad friend. We had never really had problems till she met this other girl I knew who is the fakest person ever who started telling lies and causing problems. During the time that we were not talking my husbands family all came to the realization of the lies. My friend started complaining about it and I told her that ever problem she is having is what I was being called a liar over and treated badly for. she got angry and said " I'm sorry I.was deseaved it wouldn't be the first time I had a friend that I decided I hated" scowled and walked away. I guess our biggest problem is she doesn't allow me to have feelings or opionions.what should I do.

Metaphorical Poem Opinion?

It made me smile a sad smile =) took me back to passing love notes in high school. I think its well written and very passionate.

What do you think of my X-Men fanfic?

Something like fanfiction may get a better response on a site ment for it. Try www.fanfiction.net or something like that. There's a section for X-Men and anything else. Happy writing!

What subculture do I fit into? (kinda long, but interesting)?

I don't know, it sounds like you are a nerd who loves themself. So you aint a nerd, us nerds know where we stand. I think you're just you.

Opinions on this excerpt?

It's not bad. It could use a tad more touch of scenery and depth, but it holds. I think the problem is that, when you do describe something, you aren't fully sure of how to do it. You are doing a lot of beating around the bush type of descriptions (if that makes sense). I think, ultimately, you need to look at flow and description